Mr. Hork is my english teacher. He is a/an British/American/Canadian(自己把国籍填上) man。He has been teaching in our school for 3(自己填上年份) years。He is a very patient and kind teacher. His teachings makes english fun and easy to learn. He always encourages us not to be shy and to speak more in english. I remember once when exam was approaching, he used his own time to give us free remedial/tutorial class. During that exam, i finally passed my english with the scoring of 66 marks./i did improve and score 70 marks for my English. I am glad to have him as my english teacher.

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鹤先生是我的英语老师。他是个美籍男人。他在我校教书有三年之久。他很有耐心，心底很善良。他的教学方法令我们觉得英语很有趣也容易学习。他常鼓励我们别害羞，要常说英语。我记得有一次大考来临，他有自己的私人时间给我免费补习。在那次的考试我英语终于以66分及格了/我英语进步了得了70分。我很感激有他作为我的英语老师。

华语烂，表达差。。。请多包涵。。=）